Wednesday, December 15, 2010

Un-hindered

This is a poetry form called Trimeric. First try at it. I know the form is correct, not sure how the content will be received.

Creaking circle path

more now in past than future

clock shows no regret

asking to be re-wound


More now in past than future

lean to scale's light half

dips the heavy platter

unwavered by our plea


Clock shows no regret

despite it's sprung gear

mark, or not, the hour

stagnant it will not be


Asking to be re-wound

by lotion, balm or blade

age internal apparent

no matter smooth exterior

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