Wednesday, December 15, 2010

Haiku

My first attempts at modern Haiku

speak to me delta

overflow from river bend

replant summer green

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fray the gentle mood

simple braid to tasseled mop

strands now fall alone

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pebbles swirl water

babble tinkles lullaby

fingerprint of stream 

2 comments:

  1. Welcome to blogspot.com Rusty! I think your first attempts at haiku are very good. I particularly love the last one... it talks to me the most... Marion

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  2. Me too... last one in particular. Fine haiku debut!

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